Following the tutorial for this, I rewrote my essay to include more of a context for the way that Cartier-Bresson’s reputation has developed and changed since the 1950s. I then spent a lot more time getting it back down to under 1000 words + 10%!
This is version uploaded to the assessment g:drive (and also available here as part of my online log). In the g:drive copy, I have bold-ed the two paragraphs containing significant changes from the original.
On the g:drive, the file is called 512973-PH1CAN-assignment4-revised
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